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=== {kc0026_1s.jpg} Hernan Cortés and Spanish militaries entered the Aztec empire.
..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. Hernan Cortés, a man who gave up his law degree for sought his fortune from the new world that Columbus and others had discover, gained his permission of expedition of Aztec. In 1519, Cortés entered the Aztec empire with a group of about 600 men and a few horses. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. Overtime, he learned of the Aztecs and began to make his way inland to the Aztec capital city.However, in 1521, Cortés entered the capital city, Tenochtitlan. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II, the leader of Aztecs, believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma II go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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..One night, Spanish attempted to escape, they had been discover while they were creeping along the roadways. They fought an ferocious battle, Cortés's army could not handle the powerful Aztec's attack. That night Cortés had lost many of his men. Cortés took defense with his Tlaxcalteca allies. In June 1521, Cortez started the final battle on Tenochtitlan, with small ships to use on the lake, and with thousands of local Indian allies. The meeting of the two worlds meant that one would end. Mexico conquest glory defeat. By August Cortés had conquered. He captured the city, and made a prisoner of the new Aztec leader Cuauhtemoc. The Aztec Empire was no more, old gods were replace from new once, and the city Tenochtitlan was leveled to the ground.
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Cortés was born in the Spanish city of Medellín in 1485. When he was a young man, he studied law, but he soon gave that up to seek his fortune in the New World that was just being discovered by Columbus and others. First he went to the island of Santo Domingo, which now known as the Dominican Republic. In 1504, he was only 19 years old at the time. He stayed there for seven years, then took part in the Spanish conquest of Cuba in 1511. He became mayor of Santiago de Cuba and stayed there until 1518. In 1519, he talked the Spanish governor of Cuba into letting him lead an expedition to Mexico.
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Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
You should write at least a little bit about Montezuma and also write about what they thought about Cortes. You should write a lot more because they is a lot of important parts that you missed and you should write about the war and how Cortes won. Reduce your pictures size because you will have more space to write about the words and you will see how little words you write even though the pictures look good.
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=== {kc0026_1s.jpg} Hernan Cortés and Spanish militaries entered the Aztec empire.
..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. Hernan Cortés, a man who gave up his law degree for sought his fortune from the new world that Columbus and others had discover, gained his permission of expedition of Aztec. In 1519, Cortés entered the Aztec empire with a group of about 600 men and a few horses. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. Overtime, he learned of the Aztecs and began to make his way inland to the Aztec capital city.However, in 1521, Cortés entered the capital city, Tenochtitlan. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II, the leader of Aztecs, believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma II go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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..One night, Spanish attempted to escape, they had been discover while they were creeping along the roadways. They fought an ferocious battle, Cortés's army could not handle the powerful Aztec's attack. That night Cortés had lost many of his men. Cortés took defense with his Tlaxcalteca allies. In June 1521, Cortez started the final battle on Tenochtitlan, with small ships to use on the lake, and with thousands of local Indian allies. The meeting of the two worlds meant that one would end. Mexico conquest glory defeat. By August Cortés had conquered. He captured the city, and made a prisoner of the new Aztec leader Cuauhtemoc. The Aztec Empire was no more, old gods were replace from new once, and the city Tenochtitlan was leveled to the ground.
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Montezuma II, was born in Tenochitlan, which is now known as the Mexico City, in 1480. He spent much of his formative years studying science, art and more than anything else. Religion as his training to become a priest in the temple of Huitzilopochtli, the god of war. Also trained about warfare, Montezuma played an Important part in the Aztec wars.
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Cortés was born in the Spanish city of Medellín in 1485. When he was a young man, he studied law, but he soon gave that up to seek his fortune in the New World that was just being discovered by Columbus and others. First he went to the island of Santo Domingo, which now known as the Dominican Republic. In 1504, he was only 19 years old at the time. He stayed there for seven years, then took part in the Spanish conquest of Cuba in 1511. He became mayor of Santiago de Cuba and stayed there until 1518. In 1519, he talked the Spanish governor of Cuba into letting him lead an expedition to Mexico.
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Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
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..The first contact Yucatan coast. Hernan Cortés, a man who gave up his law degree for sought his fortune from the new world that Columbus and others had discover, gained his permission of expedition of Aztec. In 1519, Cortés entered the Aztec empire with a group of about 600 men and a few horses. The Spanish in Aztec. However, in 1521, Cortés made Overtime, he learned of the Aztecs and began to make his way inland to Tenochtitlan, w.the Aztec capital city.However, in 1521, Cortés entered the capital city, Tenochtitlan. Instead of from Aztec.
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..One night, Spanish attempted to escape, they had been discover while they were creeping along the roadways. They fought an ferocious battle, Cortés's army could not handle the powerful Aztec's attack. That night Cortés had lost many of his men. Cortés took defense with his Tlaxcalteca allies. In June 1521, Cortez started the final battle on Tenochtitlan, with small ships to use on the lake, and with thousands of local Indian allies. The meeting of the two worlds meant that one would end. Mexico conquest glory defeat. By August Cortés had conquered. He captured the city, and made a prisoner of the new Aztec leader Cuauhtemoc. The Aztec Empire was no more, old gods were replace from new once, and the city Tenochtitlan was leveled to the ground.
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Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
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Aztec empire.
=== ..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. However, in 1521, Cortés made his way to Tenochtitlan, w. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II, the leader of Aztecs, believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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..One night, Spanish attempted to escape, they had been discover while they were creeping along the roadways. They fought an ferocious battle, Cortés's army could not handle the powerful Aztec's attack. That night Cortés had lost many of his men. Cortés took defense with his Tlaxcalteca allies. In June 1521, Cortez started the final battle on Tenochtitlan, with small ships to use on the lake, and with thousands of local Indian allies. The meeting of the two worlds meant that one would end. Mexico conquest glory defeat. By August Cortés had conquered. He captured the city, and made a prisoner of the new Aztec leader Cuauhtemoc. The Aztec Empire was no more, old gods were replace from new once, and the city Tenochtitlan was leveled to the ground.
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Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
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..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. However, in 1521, Cortés made his way to Tenochtitlan, w. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II, the leader of Aztecs, believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
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..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. However, in 1521, Cortés made his way to Tenochtitlan, w. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II, the leader of Aztecs, believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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===..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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**..One===**..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
You should write at least a little bit about Montezuma and also write about what they thought about Cortes. You should write a lot more because they is a lot of important parts that you missed and you should write about the war and how Cortes won. Reduce your pictures size because you will have more space to write about the words and you will see how little words you write even though the pictures look good.
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..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. However, in 1521, Cortés made his way to Tenochtitlan, w. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II, the leader of Aztecs, believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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===..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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**..One night, Spanish attempted to escape, they had been discover while they were creeping along the roadways. They fought an ferocious battle, Cortés's army could not handle the powerful Aztec's attack. That night Cortés had lost many of his men. Cortés took defense with his Tlaxcalteca allies. In June 1521, Cortez started the final battle on Tenochtitlan, with small ships to use on the lake, and with thousands of local Indian allies. The meeting of the two worlds meant that one would end. Mexico conquest glory defeat. By August Cortés had conquered. He captured the city, and made a prisoner of the new Aztec leader Cuauhtemoc. The Aztec Empire was no more, old gods were replace from new once, and the city Tenochtitlan was leveled to the ground.
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Montezuma II, was born in Tenochitlan, which is now known as the Mexico City, in 1480. He spent much of his formative years studying science, art and more than anything else. Religion as his training to become a priest in the temple of Huitzilopochtli, the god of war. Also trained about warfare, Montezuma played an Important part in the Aztec wars.
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Cortés was born in the Spanish city of Medellín in 1485. When he was a young man, he studied law, but he soon gave that up to seek his fortune in the New World that was just being discovered by Columbus and others. First he went to the island of Santo Domingo, which now known as the Dominican Republic. In 1504, he was only 19 years old at the time. He stayed there for seven years, then took part in the Spanish conquest of Cuba in 1511. He became mayor of Santiago de Cuba and stayed there until 1518. In 1519, he talked the Spanish governor of Cuba into letting him lead an expedition to Mexico.
Your work is easy to understand, but you have some grammar mistakes in some places. Also, you should put captions on all the pictures so we know what they are about. Maybe you should put more locations so we know where exactly in Mexico did the Aztec live in.
I like your work and the pictures and the things you wrote is very easy to understand. And you don't need to put the ".." on every starting paragraph maybe to the first one so it sound like there is someone telling the story.
You should write at least a little bit about Montezuma and also write about what they thought about Cortes. You should write a lot more because they is a lot of important parts that you missed and you should write about the war and how Cortes won. Reduce your pictures size because you will have more space to write about the words and you will see how little words you write even though the pictures look good.
By Avinarsh
..Montezuma II, was born in Tenochitlan, which is now known as the Mexico City, in 1480. He spent much of his formative years studying science, art and more than anything else. Religion as his training to become a priest in the temple of Huitzilopochtli, the god of war. Also trained about warfare, Montezuma played an Important part in the Aztec wars.
..The first contact Between Mexico and Spain occurred during 1517, when Francisco Hernandez de Cordoba, the explorer landed on the Yucatan coast. The Spanish governor of Cuba, Diego Velazquez, sent a large force under Hernan Cortés, with instructions to trade with local people in Aztec. However, in 1521, Cortés made his way to Tenochtitlan, w. Instead of attacked Spanish, Moctezuma II believed the Spanish conquistador Hernan Cortés was the returning god Quetzalcoatl. Cortés was welcomed into the Aztec capital of Tenochtitlan. "My lord, you have become fatigued, you have become tired: to the land you have arrived. You have come to your city: Mexico, here you have come to sit on your place, on your throne. Oh, it has been reserved to you for a small time; it was conserved by those who have gone, your substitutes...'' This is what has been told by rulers and royal of Aztec, governors of the city. '' You would come to ask for his throne, your place, that you would come here. Come to the land, come and rest, and take over royal houses, give food to your body." With condition of being regarded as god, Cortés simply gained allies from Aztec.
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===..The problems began when Cortés was being force to leave the city and arrest a Spanish. Aztecs started to revolt under Spanish's control. When Cortés returned, the locals were fighting to expel the Spanish. Cortés forced Moctezuma go on onto the roof of the palace to tell his people to withdraw, meanwhile, an Aztec chief was attack by huge amounts of stones, he died several days after. Under the new leader Cuitlahuac, the Aztecs continued their fight against the invaders.
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===..One night, Spanish attempted to escape, they had been discover while they were creeping along the roadways. They fought an ferocious battle, Cortés's army could not handle the powerful Aztec's attack. That night Cortés had lost many of his men. Cortés took defense with his Tlaxcalteca allies. In June 1521, Cortez started the final battle on Tenochtitlan, with small ships to use on the lake, and with thousands of local Indian allies. The meeting of the two worlds meant that one would end. Mexico conquest glory defeat. By August Cortés had conquered. He captured the city, and made a prisoner of the new Aztec leader Cuauhtemoc. The Aztec Empire was no more, old gods were replace from new once, and the city Tenochtitlan was leveled to the ground.
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